The issues I can say I have had through this process are that I have choosen a topic that is very dear to my heart. I was having an issue with keeping my personal opinion out of it. I had to find sources to prove my information. I know personal opinion is a good thing but you need the references to back it up. Give people places to go so they can comfirm the information you have given them. I think the comments I ecieved were very helpful. This has given me an insight to where I need the paper to flow, and to make sure mt thesis is proper order of my key points. I would like to think I am using this blog page after class I think it would be a good way for me to vent Also it's a great way to stay in touch with some classmates, this would be a great place to bounce ideas off of friends as well. I am going to try really hard to make my paper flow from one paragraph to the next. (with transitional words). I am also going to makes sure anyone can find the information I have explained by providing the references. I am going to provide an interesting paper so hopefully it will let people know what a horrible disease ALS is.